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Achebow

New Member
Jan 25, 2017
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Kurdistan
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OOC Information:
Please try your best to use proper grammar and correct spelling mistakes. This is a roleplay server and if accepted, writing will be your main form of communication while online.
MC Username- Achebow

How old are you?-
14

What is your favorite color?- Sapphire (Blue)

Have you read and agreed to the rules?- Yes

Have you REALLY read the rules? If so which one do you most agree with?- Yes, Roleplay rules > 3 and 5 no overpowered characters and no powergaming.

Are there any changes you would make to any the rules?(if so why?)- No

How did you find Tale of Banners?- I found out about Tale of Banners when i was looking for a roleplaying server, because i never really had a great roleplaying experience, not until i found Tale of Banners

Do you have any experience with other roleplay servers if so which server(s) and for how long?- I had roleplayed in a server called Lord of the Craft, and it was basically lord of the ring roleplay in minecraft with lore, i had roleplayed for months maybe? i do not really remember and i apologize for my weak memory.
Definitions:
If you don’t know any of the definitions feel free to look them up just make sure you understand them and write them in your own words.

What is Roleplaying?-
Roleplaying is when you act out a character in the specified world, there are multiple roleplaying types such as "City Roleplay" or "Medieval Roleplay" or "Fantasy Roleplay" and there are mixes such as "Medieval and Fantasy Roleplay".

What is Metagaming?- Metagaming is mixing out of character information and in character information, such as telling your friend on teamspeak your current location (coordinates)

What is Powergaming?- Powergaming is forcing actions upon other players or roleplaying unrealistically or unfair such as "Malgath Nerivaris Super-jumps over his enemy and lands behind him stabbing him and killing him"

What is OOC, IC, and IRL?-
Out of Character (OOC): is talking or preforming actions which are not involved in roleplay or out of your character or out of roleplaying, you can talk OOC using multiple channels such as "LOOC: Local Out Of Character" or "OOC: Which really means OOC global chat"..

In Character (IC): is Talking or preforming actions which count in roleplaying or in character, you can talk IC in multiple channels such as "Local" or "Shout" or "Whisper".. ect

In Real Life (IRL): Actions that are happening or happened in real life, Can be talked about in OOC Chat Channels.
IC Information:
Here is where you actually describe and create your own character. Be realistic! Follow the lore, and make sure your character makes sense and is someone you want to play as.

Characters Name- Zinnath Stolmuhn

Characters Age- Eighteen (18)

Characters Race- Oresian

Characters Sex (Male or female)- Male

Characters Biography (This is where you can get creative. Write down your characters story from birth to present time. Use lore and follow the server timeline, and events. Must be a minimum of 2 paragraphs long)
Character Traits & Ambitions-


Introduction: It all starts with Zinnath who was born in 1129, he was the only son in his family, no brother no sister, he grew up to become adventurous, light-hearted, cheerful and perhaps a little too bewildered.
But there's more than meets the eye, he is also charmful and royal.
He was born in a successful family in a normal village, He lived comfortably and free of trouble, his father's name was Stolmuhn and his mother's name was Cuelia, they had loved him so much and he loved them so much because he was their only son, the village he lived in was not a really known village, it was sort of hidden in the woods, nobody from the outside knew about the village, the villagers lived in happiness and Zinnath played with the children in the village everyday, they basically are having a great time, until he was about 17 years old, at that time things in his life began to change.
He gained new responsibilities and was strengthening the relationship with both parents. Alongside trusted friends, he enjoy life in this world, in this exact same village, he had many friends that helped him in his life everyday, and he helped them too, there were two specific friends that he counted as his best friends as they saved his life from many dangers and he owned them a lot, their names were Alfire and Sarbane, he would love them as much as he loved his family, they are basically one of his family members, not in blood but in relationship, if anything would happen to them he would die from sadness until things took a turn for the worse.
did a lot of small jobs and was competing in large tournaments. With the support of great parents, he reached for the stars in a crazy world.
unfortunately one day a the weather was very bad, the sky looked gloomy, and out of no where a hurricane on land could be seen far away, coming to the village in high speed, the village's bells rang, most people ran and survived the hurricane, but unfortunately he lost his dear trusted friends and his family during the hurricane and he was now all alone with nobody by his side, he would blame himself for not 'doing anything' though he couldn't do anything.

New Beginning Good Beginning: miserable and abandoned, Without any help he had to survive in a harsh world, But with his determination and perseverance to survive, with everything destroyed he went to scavenge anything he could find, he had nothing absolutely nothing, he barely managed to escape hell because of his weaknesses and remain out of reach of danger, he managed to battle the elements and start a new life.
This has turned him into the man he is today, powerless to change the past, he now works perfecting skills and talents. By doing so, he hopes to shed the memories of the past and finally find joys and comforts of life he has never had, traveling to find somewhere to start his new life.

Characters Strengths and Weaknesses-
Weaknesses: Zinnath has a couple of weaknesses which includes that he is lazy and recklessly impulsive, he is also not that strong physically, he gets paranoid a lot of the time, he is also arrogant

Strenghths: Other than weaknesses, Zinnath also has strengths and skills, mentally and physically, such as he has the talent of Perception, he has also talents such as being Comradarie, Empathy, he is also Dexterous and he also has a Sympathetic Ear, most of his talents and abilities, strengths are mental, not physical.

Characters appearance (Be descriptive)-
Zinnath has both blue-green eyes and dirty blonde hair, he is 5'10" long, he might look physically strong though he is not really strong physically, he would look smart he is wearing a shirt that is rather thick and his clothes are mostly made out of dark leather, he is wearing belts that are keeping his clothes intact and strong, he is wearing pants that are actually made out of dark leather too, he is wearing leather gloves that both of them have crystal gems attached to them, he also has a head-band that he is wearing all the time.

Please provide an in game screenshot of your characters skin here…..


Role-Playing Scenarios:
These scenarios will be used in order to test your role-playing abilities. Please answer any 3 of the 4 scenarios listed, and remember to complete these scenarios in as much detail as possible.
[1]

Your character finds themselves in the middle of an arena with nothing more than a robe on their back. As you character looks around there is what appears to be a spear on the ground approximately 15 meters ahead of them. They’re not the only person in this arena however, with several others scattered around the arena. Each member in that arena is trying to get that spear. How does you character survive this ordeal?

[2]

Returning from the tavern after a long night of drinking, your character passes through the streets and alleyways on the short return home. However, on the way you hear a woman in distress coming from around the corner. The woman is being robbed and is clearly distraught. What does your character do next?

Zinnath after hearing the woman, would peek around the corner and see what is going on, seeing that the woman is being robbed Zinnath would look for a guard nearby trying to be as sneaky as possible, not finding a guard nearby Zinnath would find a large wooden stick, he would take it and try to sneak up behind the thief, hitting the thief on his head with the stick, the thief would get knocked out from the impact on his head, Zinnath would tell the woman to go and call a guard while he stays near the knocked out thief to wait for a guard's arrival to the scene.

[3]

On the road going passing from Oseria to Crosia, your character gets lost and ends up at Crookmire Swamp. Although lost, your character decides to stay the night in Crookmire and continue their travels in the morning. After a few hours your character begins to get hungry and heads to a local street vendor. The vendor offers you some baked goods, however warns of out of body experiences if they are to eat this food. What does your character do next, and how do they react to this situation?
Zinnath takes the baked food looking at it, he thanks the vendor and puts it in his pocket, after that he goes to a guard telling him "Oi, i see ye work'in hard, here eat up ye till yer full.", with the guard eating it, Zinnath waits for something to happen to the guard, after nothing happening Zinnath eats the baked goods till he is full, and with that Zinnath asks the guard the way to Crosia, and leaves to look for an inn to rest up and continue on in the morning.

[4]

In the midst of battle, your character finds themselves next a wounded enemy soldier. The soldier is on the floor, clearly upset as he cradles one of his dead. The soldier then grasps at a cloth and removes it from the dead soldiers pocket. He continues to cry, and starts calling the dead soldier's name is despair. Then the soldier glances up to see your character with sword in hand, but does not care of your approach, continuing to cradle the dead soldier. What does your character do next?
Zinnath looking at the enemy solider, he starts to get disturbed and him being terrified, an expression of horror would be noticed on his face, with that scene in front of him, he is starts tearing up, and with that Zinnath is lost looking at this terrifying display in front of him, he decided to talk to the enemy solider telling him "Ey.. mate... dis is war... ye know, ye should expect things like dis happening everywheer mate", after that Zinnath would turn around trying to get out of this situation saying "I hope dis never' happen agein." with that being said Zinnath goes away trying to leave the war-zone, and go anywhere except this place.

Any extra information you would like to add on your application? [Optional]: Yes.
I have wrote this application with everything i know, i had spent hours on the application, and i don't know if anything else is missing but this is what i wrote, i hope i did my best and sorry if there are any mistakes. thank you.
 
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NTE_Killer4life

Well-Known Member
Dec 17, 2015
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Hullo, I am NTE_KIller4life and shall be reviewing your application today. :3 Just to make sure you are aware, the server is still in the works and is not up and running yet. But when it is up and running you shall be able to roleplay on it.

Your application has been put on... PENDING.
  • Everything looks fine except the biography/backstory. I would like for you to expand upon his childhood and family. Be descriptive, as if you were telling a descriptive story to someone who knows absolutely nothing about this character.
Please fix the bulleted issues within 48 hours from the time of this post. Failure to do so will result in denial of the application and you will have to reapply 24 hours later from the time of denial.

Time and Date Reviewed: 2:56 PM EST, 1/25/17
 

Achebow

New Member
Jan 25, 2017
2
0
1
Kurdistan
#3
Hullo, I am NTE_KIller4life and shall be reviewing your application today. :3 Just to make sure you are aware, the server is still in the works and is not up and running yet. But when it is up and running you shall be able to roleplay on it.

Your application has been put on... PENDING.
  • Everything looks fine except the biography/backstory. I would like for you to expand upon his childhood and family. Be descriptive, as if you were telling a descriptive story to someone who knows absolutely nothing about this character.
Please fix the bulleted issues within 48 hours from the time of this post. Failure to do so will result in denial of the application and you will have to reapply 24 hours later from the time of denial.

Time and Date Reviewed: 2:56 PM EST, 1/25/17
i had edited the post and added more in to the backstory and edited some stuff in it, i am hoping that this is all i have to add, if needed more backstory content, please tell me.
Thank you.