DENIED DanteZblue_potats whitelist application~ ft aedyn

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MineCraft Username(s):

Answer -DanteZblue_potat


Full UUID for your MineCraft account(s) (Found here):

Answer -454d6289-8e31-42a8-8642-bae3ca7b5fcd


How old are you? (We need to know this as our server has an age restriction)

Answer -18


Have you read through our rules? (Found here)

Answer -yes


Do you agree with our rules?

Answer -yes


How did you hear about Tale of Banners?

Answer -my friend treesmoothie told me about it


Do you have any previous roleplay experience?

Answer -yes on a server called lotc


Is there anything you would like to add?

Answer -not at the moment no



Part 2 of 4
Terms & definitions
Answer these definitions using your own words. The definitions can be looked up if necessary, however copy-pasting is not allowed.
What do you define as roleplaying?

Answer -an interaction of fictional or nonfictional characters to build a story line


Describe the term ‘powergaming’

Answer -going ubove the human limits lets say a wound to the gut you cant walk away from that nor shrug it off


Describe the term ‘metagaming’

Answer -useing information learned oocly and useing it irply


What is a "Mary-Sue" character?

Answer -a perfect character with no flaws



Part 3 of 4
Character Creation
Here you will create a character to use on our server.
Provide us with an ingame screenshot of your character’s skin.

Answer -look down lol sry ;-;


Name:

Answer -Aedyn Luckcaster
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Age:

Answer -5


Culture:

Answer -Oserian


Story & Biography:

Answer -an oddly small child whom was slaved at an early age aedyn Luckcaster was put away at birth and searches for a purpose seeming how he has zero parents



Part 4 of 4
Open-ended questions
At least three must be answered. Delete the spares(if applicable). Please include at least one paragraph for each of the answered questions.

Question 1
You stumble outside into the open air after some heavy drinking in an Oserian tavern. Just before you're about to pass an alleyway, a hooded man rushes out of it and runs for it - seemingly, he has both a blade and some jewellery on him. You take a quick peek in the alleyway to see a feminine figure collapsed on the ground, holding her hands over a bleeding wound in her torso. The thief is about to escape and the woman seems in critical condition. You...

Answer:i rush to the woman to see if she is alright


Question 2
You are on your way to the Korsian city of Telth to sell some wares. Upon reaching the front gates you are stopped by the guard. They deny you entry for the time being as the traffic into the city is too high. You are effectively forced to wait in the refugee camp located between the two gates for the time being. The camp is
filled with shopping stalls and refugees sleeping on the floor. How do you spend your time in the camp?

Answer:i go around and ask questions about this said city telth and i explore the said camp maybe see if their are other children


Question 3
You've gotten lost and wandered awhile into Drahl lands, eventually finding yourself in Crookmire Swamp, where you decide to settle for the night. Finding a meal to buy for the evening takes some effort, but you do come across an old crone in ragged clothing, who offers to sell you some sea-looking food. She doesn't ask much, but warns you that eating it is 'unpleasant' to outsiders. You...

Answer: i pay her for the food but dont eat it im not trusting that
 

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Your application has been denied.

While in this state it is unsuitable for approving, you are welcome to try again.

The reasons for the denial are as follows:

1. While I don't necessarily disallow child characters by default, they're unlikely to survive on Esna with 'zero parents', as you put it. Elaborating on the backstory might help with suggesting how that came to happen.

2. To further nitpick your sentence of a backstory, try setting answers to these questions:
Why was he 'put away'? Who are his parents? Where did they go?
Who gave him his full name? Why does he know it?
If he was slaved at some point in his 5 year short life, when was it? When did he escape? How did he escape, as a 5 year old with no apparent allies?
What does it mean for a 5 year old to search for his purpose? Wouldn't he just mostly want food?


3. The answers to open-ended scenarios must be at least a paragraph each.

Should you choose to re-apply, please make a new application!
 
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