DENIED Kiro's Application

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Kiro

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OOC Information:

(Please try your best to use proper grammar and correct spelling mistakes. This is a roleplay server and if accepted, writing will be your main form of communication while online.)


MC Username-KiroShiruki

How old are you?-16

What is your favorite color?-Purple or Red, Similar color scheme.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?-I agree to your terms and conditions.

Have you REALLY read the rules? If so which one do you most agree with?-No powers, honestly metagaming is the worst.

Are there any changes you would make to any the rules?(if so why?)- Over generalized personalities, like 70% of the people I see are "Dark and "Cool". Or at least try to be.

How did you find Tale of Banners?- Over PMC, Found it and decided it looked cool to try, didn't want to be staff but to go along with your story.


Definitions:

(If you don’t know any of the definitions feel free to look them up just make sure you understand them and write them in your own words.)

What is Roleplaying?- The act of placing yourself within a story, as yourself or as another. To see the story through the end and act with the knowledge that you can do almost anything.

What is Metagaming?- My version of Metagaming is similar to the below, but I understand the concept in the following. "As I roleplay on roleplaying servers.. I see a lot of people LOOKING at other peoples names and saying them. One... for example, my name is Somefattroll, someone's name in real life would NOT, I repeat NOT be Somefattroll. It would be something like Jon or Jeffrey. Metagaming is mixing OOC and IC. Or IC and OOC. Before I tell you about metagaming, OOC is Out of Character. Out of Character is just when you want to have plain fun, grind on NPC's and all that good stuff. IC (in character) is when you are In Character... now that's when you start roleplaying. So metagaming, metagaming - Mixing OOC and IC or IC and OOC. OOC and IC.. let's start with that, so if my name was Christian, I would tell the player so they wouldn't say my ACTUAL name. But they have to ask me my RP name first because I told them OOCly. Not ICly. So if I tell them OOCly and they call me "Christian" that would be metagaming, they would have to find out by asking me or so. On to powergaming! ". Taken from http://us.battle.net/wow/en/forum/topic/1306050810

What is Powergaming?- Being generally over powered, say I am in a combat scene, and I give detailed ways of attacking, and the opponent, say LolImaPCamer dodges EVERY single thing I do.

What is OOC, IC, and IRL?- Out of Character, In Character, and In real life


IC Information:

(Here is where you actually describe and create your own character. Be realistic! Follow the lore, and make sure your character makes sense and is someone you want to play as.)

Characters Name- Kiro,

Characters Age-16

Characters Race- Asian(Specifically) Chinese Japanese. Get my Chinese from my Mother, and my Japanese from my dad. Now I sound like a weaboo, why not be Korean too.

Characters Sex (Male or female)- Male.

Characters Biography (This is where you can get creative. Write down your characters story from birth to present time. Use lore and follow the server timeline, and events. Must be a minimum of 2 paragraphs long)- (Tried checking Wikia but not lots were written so ill try my best to just make one up.)(Writing a mini story, enjoy my bad writing)"Kiro, a sixteen year old male. Height sixteen. Lives alone. Convicted of Property Charges, Again?" Said Lucas "You know better than that, honestly its like you're just naturally drawn to flames. Well you need to wait here until we get this sorted out". (So, if you're wondering who's magical voice is in your head, its the guy who is arrested. Surprise Surprise its me! So, my name is Kiro, I'm in jail for accidentally burning a barn house, I'm going to go ahead and say it's not my fault. Not everyone has a bucket of flammable things that I can light up. So right now Im planning my escape from this place again, but don't tell Guard Lucas! He's pretty chill for a guard, everyone else treats me like a Diablo , whatever that is. So back to the dialogue with me in it, yay!) I look up and around at the steel bars, I sigh in relief no one is around me. I think to myself looking for my other self to try and think my way out. "Alright, so there are steel bars, and a door. Both too small for me to squeeze through, they surprisingly did not confiscate my gunpowder satchel and my earring, guess they didn't think it was important." I think to myself some more and then smack myself in the head for being dumb. I had a satchel full of gunpowder, sixty four patches. While I hear the guards talking about me being a menace and such, I line the cracks in the wall with gunpowder until it looks like the wall has been bleeding. Now for the fun part! I unhook my earring, with the metal on it I scrape the side of the jail wall until sparks come off of it, I repeat this until the gunpowder flashes white like TNT. I back up and hope for the best. "They know perfectly well that I have a EXPLOSIVE nature, they should really BURN that into their brains so its fine!", the wall explodes as the guards rush over with their weapons, I jump off the towers into the water below the last glimpse of the guards is them looking angry and surprised. How joyful, I'm wanted now. There seemed to be a small brown object in the distance. A wagon I suppose, well I guess its time to start again, where no body knows who I am. I attempt to dry myself as best as I can before they get here, and when they pass I hop on the back of their caravan. Next stop to (Name Starting Point City)! (So yeah, My name is Kiro and I am currently sleeping next to a chicken waiting to get here. Not many people care to know about me, mostly about their flammable objects when I'm around. Find out more if you don't mind a dude with nothing COOL about him! See ya.)

Character Traits & Ambitions-

Characters Strengths and Weaknesses-(Ill base some of this off video game characters okay.) Str: Deduction Skills (Phoenix Wright), Pyrotechnics Skills(Noone in mind), Good fighter with small short swords. (Ausar The Vile/Siris The Sacrifice) Insane (Deadpool). Weaknesses: Careless(Deadpool), Anti-social, Obsessive with weapons (Jinx), and Insane.

Characters appearance (Be descriptive)- He wears a red cloak, unknown where he got it from, with runic patterns, most of the time he has a hood on. He has black hair, Purple Eyes, and the Greek letters Theta and Xi burned into his right and left hand, but he has gloves to cover this up. Has leather boots with gold straps on it, with some loose pants.

Please provide an in game screenshot of your characters skin here….. upload_2015-11-18_20-10-6.png
 
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Nov 20, 2015
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This application has been Denied by the staff team. You may re-apply in 24 hours then we will consider taking another look at a renewed application.

The problems with this applications were:
1. Explanation of Meta-gaming should be written in your own words.
2. Application is messy, please write in properly without OOC brackets in an IC biography.
3. Please make a realistic character. Your character does action that could be seen in a movie. Also use realistic ambitions not taken from a video game.
4. Please read up on some role-play.To find what you could experience on Tale of Banners. http://taleofbanners.com/forum/index.php?threads/roleplaying-guide.25/
 
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