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Achilles

New Member
Aug 16, 2018
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Michigan
#1
MineCraft Username(s):

Answer - AchillesTheGreat


Full UUID for your MineCraft account(s) (Found here):

Answer - b66199fe-e2d4-4af2-9f94-f0e530879bd8


How old are you? (We need to know this as our server has an age restriction)

Answer - 17


Have you read through our rules? (Found here)

Answer - Yes


Do you agree with our rules?

Answer - Yes


How did you hear about Tale of Banners?

Answer - Google search


Do you have any previous roleplay experience?

Answer - Only a bit on a factions roleplaying server a long time ago.


Is there anything you would like to add?

Answer - no




Part 2 of 4
Terms & definitions
Answer these definitions using your own words. The definitions can be looked up if necessary, however copy-pasting is not allowed.
What do you define as roleplaying?

Answer - Playing a character in a certain situation and making descisions that you think that character would make in those circumstances.


Describe the term ‘powergaming’

Answer - Playing a character in a way to be better than everyone else rather than with roleplay and other characters in mind.


Describe the term ‘metagaming’

Answer - using out of character info in character


What is a "Mary-Sue" character?

Answer - A character that is perfect at everything




Part 3 of 4
Character Creation
Here you will create a character to use on our server.
Provide us with an ingame screenshot of your character’s skin.

Answer - 1534792120022.png


Name:

Answer - Achilles Brightwatcher


Age:

Answer - 19


Culture:

Answer - Oserian


Story & Biography:

Answer - Orphaned when he was young Achilles was adopted by a city guard captain by the name of Grinold Brightwatcher who disappeared recently leaving Achilles mostly alone to fend for himself. Achilles has blonde hair, blue eyes, and stands around 6 ft tall. Usually is dressed in a worn guard uniform that he took from his father's house before leaving.


Part 4 of 4
Open-ended questions
At least three must be answered. Delete the spares(if applicable). Please include at least one paragraph for each of the answered questions.

Question 1
You stumble outside into the open air after some heavy drinking in an Oserian tavern. Just before you're about to pass an alleyway, a hooded man rushes out of it and runs for it - seemingly, he has both a blade and some jewellery on him. You take a quick peek in the alleyway to see a feminine figure collapsed on the ground, holding her hands over a bleeding wound in her torso. The thief is about to escape and the woman seems in critical condition. You...

Answer: I call for help from the guard and rush to the women to get her to a place of healing. I also attempt to memorize the features of the hooded man.


Question 2
You are on your way to the Korsian city of Telth to sell some wares. Upon reaching the front gates you are stopped by the guard. They deny you entry for the time being as the traffic into the city is too high. You are effectively forced to wait in the refugee camp located between the two gates for the time being. The camp is
filled with shopping stalls and refugees sleeping on the floor. How do you spend your time in the camp?

Answer: I talk to people to try to gain some useful knowledge (maybe the best place to sell my wares once I get access to the city) and I would try to explore the refugee camp.


Question 3
You've gotten lost and wandered awhile into Drahl lands, eventually finding yourself in Crookmire Swamp, where you decide to settle for the night. Finding a meal to buy for the evening takes some effort, but you do come across an old crone in ragged clothing, who offers to sell you some sea-looking food. She doesn't ask much, but warns you that eating it is 'unpleasant' to outsiders. You...

Answer: I pass up the offer and go hungry because the hit to my constitution is probably not worth it.


Question 4
In the midst of battle, you find yourself approaching a wounded enemy soldier. The soldier is on the floor, clearly in terror as they cradle one of the dead. Enemy forces begin to advance in the distance and you know you have to act fast. The soldier then grasps at a cloth and removes it from the dead soldiers pocket. They continue to cry, and starts calling the dead soldier's name in despair. Then the soldier glances up to see you - with your weapon up - but does not care of your approach, continuing to cradle the dead soldier. You…

Answer: I tell the the soldier he's dead and we need to move and try to drag him away.


Question 5
You have wandered across a seemingly endless tundra for what have felt like days. A raging snowstorm makes you unable to see more than a few metres ahead. Being almost out of resources, you are delighted to find out that you have stumbled your way to a village. Upon closer inspection you find out it's a Northern village, and the residents are not very friendly towards strangers. What do you do in this dire situation?

Answer: I enter the village and beg and offer coin for their hospitality. If they accept I maintain an eye on my possessions if they deny or become hostile i'll look like I'm leaving but try to double back to hide somewhere warm like a barn.
 

Roedhip

Application Team
Staff member
Application Team
Jan 3, 2016
33
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Scotland
#3


You’re almost there! Your application is pending.

There are only a few things to change for a final decision.

Make the following edits to your application:

1. Please expand upon your powergaming and Mary-Sue definitions. Your current definitions aren't wrong, but I would like to see more detail.

2. Please expand significantly on your backstory/biography, show me what major events have happened in your character's life and how your character came to be the person they are now.

3. Please expand on your open-ended questions, I would like to see a paragraph for each question you choose to answer (remembering that you only need to answer three). If you aren't sure how to answer and open-ended question, have a read through some accepted applications or ask me.

Once that is done, make a comment affirming you have made these changes and your application will be reviewed again as soon as possible.

Good luck!
 

Verando

Application Team
Staff member
Application Team
Lore Team
Sep 21, 2017
59
7
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United States
#4





Your application has been denied.

While in this state it is unsuitable for approving, you are welcome to try again.

The reason for denial is as follows
1. You have failed to make the required changes within the working limit.


You are free to make a new application after one week.