DENIED Whitelist Application for Hjormel

Hjormel

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Jul 23, 2018
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#1
MineCraft Username(s):

Answer - Hjormel


Full UUID for your MineCraft account(s) (Found here):
Answer - 769d4642-3d14-41bb-9502-69591c339e26


How old are you? (We need to know this as our server has an age restriction)
Answer -22


Have you read through our rules? (Found here)
Answer - Yes


Do you agree with our rules?
Answer - Yes


How did you hear about Tale of Banners?
Answer - I left a server i was working on so i decided to search after a new server to spend time on, and i used to play alot of rp server a while back so i decided to check the rp section on PMC and i found this hidden gem.


Do you have any previous roleplay experience?
Answer - Alot


Is there anything you would like to add?
Answer - I been community manager and server architect for a few years on diffrent servers, also was playing (and i mean 24/7) on rp servers.


Part 2 of 4
Terms & definitions
Answer these definitions using your own words. The definitions can be looked up if necessary, however copy-pasting is not allowed.
What do you define as roleplaying?
Answer - Be someone thats not yourself, be Bob age 30 a smitherboys for example.


Describe the term ‘powergaming’
Answer - You tend to powergaming if you have a set goal that you try to max or tend to break rules to give your character a extra boost or doing ridicoulse combat moves.


Describe the term ‘metagaming’
Answer - gain outside information that your charcater wouldn't know of'.


What is a "Mary-Sue" character?
Answer - flawless character


Part 3 of 4
Character Creation
Here you will create a character to use on our server.
Provide us with an ingame screenshot of your character’s skin.
Answer - Hjormel.png


Name:
Answer - Hjormel Grimdal


Age:
Answer - in early 30


Culture:
Answer - Northern


Story & Biography:
Answer - A man who used to have a good and calm life, in his early days he was a carpenter, which he later leaved due to hard times and tireness, he decided to take one day at a time and became a wanderer - with a shortnotices his beloved one left him and he could not bare to remember her name so he strike out to adventures.

Hjormel is around his 30's

Brown hair

Average built

he favor axe and shield but can use a bow when find necessary.

He is terrified of water and for the monsters that he was told could be lurking there.

Part 4 of 4
Open-ended questions
At least three must be answered. Delete the spares(if applicable). Please include at least one paragraph for each of the answered questions.

Question 1
You stumble outside into the open air after some heavy drinking in an Oserian tavern. Just before you're about to pass an alleyway, a hooded man rushes out of it and runs for it - seemingly, he has both a blade and some jewellery on him. You take a quick peek in the alleyway to see a feminine figure collapsed on the ground, holding her hands over a bleeding wound in her torso. The thief is about to escape and the woman seems in critical condition. You...

Answer: Try to remember him and rush for the women aid, none shall die - he would try to stop the bleeding and call for help, he would try to ask her if she know who it was or why it happen. (To later find him, or possibly report him)


Question 2
You are on your way to the Korsian city of Telth to sell some wares. Upon reaching the front gates you are stopped by the guard. They deny you entry for the time being as the traffic into the city is too high. You are effectively forced to wait in the refugee camp located between the two gates for the time being. The camp is
filled with shopping stalls and refugees sleeping on the floor. How do you spend your time in the camp?

Answer: As Hjormel respect the authority he accept the guard word about denied entry, - he would have a bit of a problem to handle the currently situation, he would see if he see any other northerners that he perhaps could join up with or he'd try to ensure his goods' are well secured and he would stay awake all time to ensure that none of his values dissepear.


Question 3
You've gotten lost and wandered awhile into Drahl lands, eventually finding yourself in Crookmire Swamp, where you decide to settle for the night. Finding a meal to buy for the evening takes some effort, but you do come across an old crone in ragged clothing, who offers to sell you some sea-looking food. She doesn't ask much, but warns you that eating it is 'unpleasant' to outsiders. You...

Answer: Would stare on the crone for a while and say ''No thank you, im fine'' and probly ask her if she know anywhere else, a pub, tavern or any other place to get food?

(during this moment Hjormel would be scared if there was water nearby)


Question 4
In the midst of battle, you find yourself approaching a wounded enemy soldier. The soldier is on the floor, clearly in terror as they cradle one of the dead. Enemy forces begin to advance in the distance and you know you have to act fast. The soldier then grasps at a cloth and removes it from the dead soldiers pocket. They continue to cry, and starts calling the dead soldier's name is despair. Then the soldier glances up to see you - with your weapon up - but does not care of your approach, continuing to cradle the dead soldier. You…

Answer: - Would walk past him.


Question 5
You have wandered across a seemingly endless tundra for what have felt like days. A raging snowstorm makes you unable to see more than a few metres ahead. Being almost out of resources, you are delighted to find out that you have stumbled your way to a village. Upon closer inspection you find out it's a Northern village, and the residents are not very friendly towards strangers. What do you do in this dire situation?

Answer: Due to he is a Northerner himself he'd feel like home, and ask if they need help and how things goes in the village.
 

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Your application has been denied.
While in this state it is unsuitable for approving, you are welcome to try again.
The reasons for the denial are as follows:
1. Your application has a lot of typos/grammar errors. Try to fix what you can - remember, the whitelist application is a preview of your writing(and thus roleplay) ability.
2. Your powergaming and metagaming definitions are lacking.
2a - what is maxing a set goal?
2b - what is outside information?
3. Your character's age isn't definite. Even if your character does not know his age, you will need to.
4. Your character's backstory is short and vague. A lot can happen in 30 years.
5. Your open-ended questions are very vague and lack the minimum length of one paragraph each. If you find it troubling to expand on 5 questions, remember you only need to do a minimum of 3.

Should you choose to re-apply, please make a new application! You can copy and paste the parts I haven't mentioned above.
You can contact me through Discord(The_Roleplayer/Ekk) or on-site private messaging for any assistance with your next application.