DENIED whitelist application

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Minecraft Username(s):

- GravityQueenKat

Full UUID for your MineCraft account(s) (Found here):

-GravityQueenKat

What is your age?
(We need to know this as our server has an age restriction)


-18

Have you read the server rules? (Found here)

- Yes

Do you agree with the server rules?

- Yes

How did you hear about Tale of Banners?

-From the Internet

Do you have any previous roleplay experience?
(Please give examples, no experience is acceptable)


- I do Rp on Instagram allot so yea ^^

Additional Information: (If any)

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Section 2/4 - Terms & Definitions

Please answer these definitions using your own words, the definitions may be researched however not plagiarized (copy-pasted).


What do you define as roleplaying?

- Having fun playing as the character you like

Describe the term ‘powergaming’ in your own words:

-Gaming to reach a Progress to a specific Goal

Describe the term ‘metagaming’ in your own words:

-Metagaming might also refer to a game which functions to create or modify the rules of a sub-game.

What is a "Mary-Sue" character?

-a Fictionial Character

What does the abbreviation ‘OOC’ mean & when should this be used?

-in role-playing, indicating that a person is making a comment, suggestion, etc., that isn't coming from the character but from the person him- or herself.
in fanfiction, signaling that the way the author chose to portray the characters (or perhaps unintentionally portrayed them) may not be consistent with how the characters act, think, or speak in the original work on which the fanfiction is based.
Section 3/4 - Character Creation
Here you will create an example character that could exist in the server’s history and lore.


Provide us with an in-game screenshot of your character’s skin.

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1589484495210.png Name:


-Kat/Alua

Age:

- 17

Culture:

- Gravity Shifters

Story & Biography (please go into detail, we recommend two paragraphs but expect at least one. Please outline character history, personality traits and the things that make your character unique. Have fun with this section!)

(Please note although the character you apply with can commit illegal or immoral acts you cannot do these things on the server without an Intrigue application. This can be applied for once you are whitelisted) Found here:

https://taleofbanners.com/forum/forums/intrigue-application.119/ (Intrigue Application)

- Kat is a Normal Girl wich has the Ability to Manipulate Gravity at will

Section 4/4 - Open-ended questions
Please answer at least three of the questions to show how your character would interact with the world. Delete the spares (if applicable). Please include at least one paragraph for each question you answer.

Question 1

You stumble outside into the open air after some heavy drinking in an Oserian tavern. Just before you're about to pass an alleyway, a hooded man rushes out of it and runs for it - seemingly, he has both a blade and some jewellery on him. You take a quick peek in the alleyway to see a feminine figure collapsed on the ground, holding her hands over a bleeding wound in her torso. The thief is about to escape and the woman seems in critical condition. You...

- Kat would shift her gravity to prevent the thief from running away and would start to First Aid the Woman as she pressed the Thief against a wall taking his Jewlery bringing it back to the place they were with a smile

Question 2

You are on your way to the Korsian city of Telth to sell some wares. Upon reaching the front gates you are stopped by the guard. They deny you entry for the time being as the traffic into the city is too high. You are effectively forced to wait in the refugee camp located between the two gates for the time being. The camp is
filled with shopping stalls and refugees sleeping on the floor. How do you spend your time in the camp?

- kat would look around in confusion and concerned since she came from another world, she would look around and try to ask people for help but she was too shy and she walked around more finally asking people for help but all she got were no answers

Question 3

You've gotten lost and wandered awhile into Drahl lands, eventually finding yourself in Crookmire Swamp, where you decide to settle for the night. Finding a meal to buy for the evening takes some effort, but you do come across an old crone in ragged clothing, who offers to sell you some sea-looking food. She doesn't ask much, but warns you that eating it is 'unpleasant' to outsiders. You...

- Kat looked at the man with a worried face definetely knowing somethings wrong and ran away deeper into the swamps forest not knowing where she was running to crying for her friends

Question 4

In the midst of battle, you find yourself approaching a wounded enemy soldier. The soldier is on the floor, clearly in terror as they cradle one of the dead. Enemy forces begin to advance in the distance and you know you have to act fast. The soldier then grasps at a cloth and removes it from the dead soldiers pocket. They continue to cry, and starts calling the dead soldier's name in despair. Then the soldier glances up to see you - with your weapon up - but does not care of your approach, continuing to cradle the dead soldier. You…

- kat would lay her hand on the soldiers shoulder and smile saying "we got this just pull yourself together and fight!" as she started to attack the enemies Forces with a hope she encouraged the soldier for revenging his fallen Soldiers

Question 5

You have wandered across a seemingly endless tundra for what have felt like days. A raging snowstorm makes you unable to see more than a few metres ahead. Being almost out of resources, you are delighted to find out that you have stumbled your way to a village. Upon closer inspection you find out it's a Northern village, and the residents are not very friendly towards strangers. What do you do in this dire situation?

- kat would cry falling to her knees saying "please.....i wandered through this tundra endlessly i nned food and water..." as she stood up hoping she convinced the Residents of the Northern Village

The End! Once you have completed this application and post it here:

https://taleofbanners.com/forum/forums/whitelist-applications.13/ (Whitelist Applications)

Our application team will look at it as soon as possible!

Your application may be put onto pending when amendments are needed. Once you have amended the changes please notify the application team member by replying to the thread. The Application Team will then will review your application again. You have 14 days to make the amendments before the application is denied.

Thank you for applying for Tale of Banners!
 
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Your application has been denied.

While in this state it is unsuitable for approving, you are welcome to try again.

The reasons for the denial are as follows:

1. You failed to provide your full UUID, the link provided in the format will give you the full UUID, so next time you make an application be sure to use it.

2. Your powergaming, metagaming, and Mary-Sue definitions are all insufficient. Do more research to find a better context for powergaming, metagaming, and Mary-Sue characters in an RP context. When you apply again, try to show an understanding of the definitions in your responses.

3. Your OOC response was copy-pasted from urban dictionary. This should be similar to the definitions, where there should not be copy-pasting, but instead research and understanding.

4. Your culture is not from our lore

5. Your character bio is severely lacking in terms of server lore context and adds the concept of superpowers, which do not exist in the realm of Esna. Please familiarize yourself with the server lore before you make another application. Relevant lore can be found in
these forums.

6. Your questions all relate to the character's superpowers and thus would need to be redone. I would recommend spending time using proper punctuation and grammar as well. Paint a picture for me of what your character does in the moment.

Should you choose to re-apply, please make a new application!
 
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